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The Commonwealth Foundation conducted an investigation and determined that Jamir Nazir’s story “The Serpent in the Grove” was original, despite allegations of AI use. The Pangram tool flagged the text as 100% artificial, but the prize organizers chose not to rely on the detectors.
The short story “The Serpent in the Grove”—about a cocoa farmer who cheated on his wife and tried to kill her—was published in Granta magazine after Nazir became the regional winner of the prestigious Commonwealth Prize in May. Shortly after publication, signs emerged that the text might have been generated by AI.
Pangram, a leading tool for detecting AI-generated text, flagged the story as 100% artificial. Individual phrases from the dense, convoluted text went viral online. For example, one woman in the story “had a way of walking that turned benches into men,” while another “smiled like dawn over a sink.”
Last Tuesday, the Commonwealth Foundation announced that Nazir’s story had been selected as the overall winner of the year among regional winners. The organization conducted an investigation but did not use Pangram or other AI detectors, citing their inability to provide definitive results and “concerns regarding creative ownership and consent.”
Instead, the foundation held “detailed discussions” about the authors’ creative process and examined:
Director-General Razmi Faruk stated: “After thorough consultation with our judges and careful review of all available information, we are satisfied that AI was not used in the writing of the winning stories.”
In a telephone interview, Nazir said he felt vindicated and relieved. “Listen, I didn’t use it!” he said, referring to AI. However, during the conversation, he avoided giving direct answers, and some of his statements were confusing.
Paradoxically, Nazir expressed the view that AI-generated writing will soon be widely accepted in literature, even though he insisted that he did not use AI tools when creating his story. He spoke positively of AI as a revolutionary technology but was wary of the consequences of such statements.
Nazir also cited Derek Walcott as one of his main literary inspirations but was unable to name a single one of his works. At the same time, he stated that he had prepared a collection of short stories in Walcott’s style, which he hopes to publish soon.